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| Evolution and Process | |
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Background From Neil Postman's "The Word Weavers/ The World Makers"… …Let us take the equally strange case of questions. There will be no disagreement, I think, to my saying that all the answers given to students are the end products of questions. Everything we know has its origin in questions. Questions, we might say, are the principal intellectual instruments available to human beings. The how is it possible that no more than one in a hundred students has ever been exposed to an extended and systematic study of the art and science of question-asking? |
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The Idea In the spirit of Postman's comments, the Evolution and Process essay seeks to pose a well-considered question about the nature of or reason for some topic, and then address this question. The essay will be a combination of several different genres of writing, possibly including cause and effect, process analysis, comparison and contrast, classification, and argument. However, don't let this idea overwhelm you. The primary focus of this essay will be answering the question "why?" in regards to a focus of your choice. As such, the essay should begin with a "why" question, and then proceed to investigate causes, influences, and reasons for this state of affairs. Thus, the essay's purpose could encompass the following:
Here's where the title fits in. No concept exists in a vacuum--rather, there are reasons for the status quo or the world existing as we know it. Your goal in this essay is to trace the evolution of a concept in a way that brings a greater understanding of it to your audience. |
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Practical Advice To avoid feeling lost, confused, or swamped by abstractions with this essay, choose a limited topic! Students often overlook specific trees because of the vastness of the forest. That is, they often want to choose a focus that may be too broad to handle adequately. Also, many students feel a need to choose topics that they think are "academically acceptable"…which means that they think topics such as abortion, capital punishment, and gun control are just fine to write about, while the nature and purpose of a necktie, the convention of toenail painting, or the rhyme and reason of toilet-stall design are way too "out there" for legitimate analysis. We're all thinking, curious people, and we should be asking "why?" as part of our daily existence. Choose one of those questions you've pondered in passing--concerning something you have a curiosity about or interest in--to address in this essay. |
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Some Examples:
Ever wonder what's behind this very common piece of male attire? It certainly seems to serve very little practical purpose, not to mention often making the wearer rather uncomfortable. Where did neckties evolve from, and how did this strip of cloth become essential for a certain type of wardrobe? Why did the necktie develop as a professional male accouterment, and not a headband or a necklace? What are the set of cultural values inherent in a necktie? Your investigation here would probably lead you to some historical background, along with some supported speculation on your part as to the origins of the tie. Why do women (and some men) paint their toenails? Why does this common custom persist in our modern culture? What are its origins, and how has come to be seen as acceptable and feminine, instead of masculine? Why are public American toilets designed as they are? Specifically, what purposes do toilet stalls serve? If for privacy, then why do we they have huge gaps at the top and bottom? What manner of privacy do they provide? How do urinals differ, and why? How do they reflect different or changing cultural values?
Many American families have the furniture in their living room arrayed around the locus of the TV set. How does this represent a change from a family 50, 100, or 1000 years ago? How did the television--an alien box of wires, metal, and electronics--gain acceptance into the American home? What shapes has it assumed over the years (and why), and what values and traditions does it represent? What technology/values/traditions did it replace? |
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The Structure of the Essay… …will depend on your focus. Some topics may require more of a speculative approach; most will require some historical insight or perspective. This means you may well have to rely on outside sources in your essay that help support whatever point you're developing. Depending on your topic, coming to a solid conclusion with the essay might prove difficult, and this may in fact not be your purpose--your essay might be an investigation of different theories that provide us instead with further intellectual avenues of research. Thus, the question you pose may lead to further questions rather than a clear-cut answer. What's important here is a clear explanation and analysis, wherein you support any claims you make with clear reasoning and evidence as you explain your meaning. |
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Some Caveats Some writers are tempted in this sort of essay to overstate their case or make summary judgments and proclamations. Pay attention to the following:
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Assignment Write a 1200-1600 word essay that uses strong personal voice, interpretive explanation, and specific informative detail to investigate the evolution of a certain specific topic of your choice. Your essay should bring a larger understanding of the topic to the reader through clear reasoning, sound assertions, and complete analysis. |
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Voice You want to maintain an academic yet accessible tone in your essay. If your style tends towards a casual feel, be very careful that loose structure and careless diction don't threaten your credibility. Similarly, if you are generally more formal in style, ask yourself how you can engage the reader and maintain energy through the essay. |
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