Below is an
argument from a recent Newsweek
article about electric toothbrushes.
What follows is the beginning of an analysis of this argument
following the instructions for the separate arguments for the assignment due on
1/30/03.
Statements of
“fact” are underlined. Statements of
“opinion/belief” are highlighted in yellow.
Statements have
been numbered to facilitate construction of the diagram.
From Newsweek, January 27, 2003, Vol. 141,
Issue 4
“Less Power to You”
(1) Recent data from 29 clinical trials show that most battery-powered
toothbrushes are no more effective at removing plaque than plain old plastic
ones. (2)
A manual brush is just as good, says dentist Matt Messina, as long as
you're not simply "waving your brush at your teeth." (3) Only pricey rotation-oscillation
models (those with bristles that circle in one direction, then the other, like
the $25-to-$80 Braun Oral-B) perform better, removing 11 percent more plaque.
(4) But even that isn't reason to run out and buy one: (5) it may not translate into less chance of gum disease in the long term.
(6)"The whole multimillion-dollar market is founded on
the weakest of science," says Bill Shaw, who helped compile the
data for the Cochrane Oral Health Group. (7)
Most trials have lasted less than three months, and the wildly popular
SpinBrush has been through very few studies (it wasn't included in the
Cochrane report). Shaw, who uses a power brush himself, notes that at least it
feels good, and (8) it "isn't worse than a
manual brush." In other words, (9)
it may not help your
teeth, but it won't hurt them, either. (10) We can't
say the same for your wallet.
What is the main conclusion? It is implied in statement (10).
“We can’t say the same for your wallet” can be taken to mean “Electric toothbrushes are not worth the
cost.”
Which statements support this claim? Consider them individually.
1. Most battery powered toothbrushes are no more effective … than
plain old plastic ones.
2. A manual toothbrush is just as good (as a battery powered one).
3. Only expensive rotation toothbrushes perform better than manual
brushes (11% more plaque removal).
4. More plaque removal is not reason to buy a battery powered
toothbrush.
5. A battery powered toothbrush may not decrease the chance of gum
disease.
6. The multi-million dollar market for powered toothbrushes is
founded on weakest science.
7. Most studies of the brushes have lasted less than 3 months and the
SpinBrush has been through very few studies.
8. Power toothbrushes are not worse than manual brushes.
9. Power toothbrushes may not help your teeth, but they won’t hurt
them, either.
10. MAIN
CONCLUSION: Electric toothbrushes are not worth the cost.
Now you have to figure out how to put all the inferences together to lead to the main conclusion.
We will do this in class on 1/30.